After finishing the first lot of editing for our music video we took part in a crit which would create the chance to improve out music video and even refim if we were in dire need to. We recieved some positive feedback and was given several suggestions on how we could improve our music video........
*Improve on the narrative. for example have more of a storyline and why the band decided to do what theyre were doing.
* Close up shots.
*Shots from a wider varietty of angles.